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A Haikui Haiku

A haiku about emptiness

By Maya Or TzurPublished 9 days ago 1 min read
A Haikui Haiku
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A resoundingness

In the emptiness of my heart

Silence. I jump in

HaikuMental HealthStream of Consciousness

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Maya Or Tzur

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Just a 26 y.o woman writing 'nd stuff. Articles, poems, prose.

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  • Reiley5 days ago

    Haikus are so difficult to get just right in their simplicity, and yet, I felt so many things in these three lines alone. A metaphysical, a subconscious, a mental, and even a physical act of jumping to action, of springing on after being consumed by silence. It can also be taken that one chooses to jump into the emptiness to try and feel something. So many feelings. Just seventeen syllables. Loved this one!

  • Miss Bey6 days ago

    Love it!❤️❤️❤️🙂

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