Can a senryu rhyme?
Maybe, but not every time;
forced chime is a crime.
I've decided, belatedly, to make up for my long near-absence on Vocal by writing 365 stories this year (0-100, that's me). I'll need to catch up, which probably means a lot of short poetry for a while. This one is a little silly.
Let me know if you liked it or not in the comments. :)
If you enjoy haiku/senryu, you might like my last story:
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Sudden
I scour all our chats and find so little; I thought there were more pictures. I've decided, belatedly, to make up for my long near-absence on Vocal by writing 365 stories this year (0-100, that's me). I'll need to catch up, which probably means a lot of short poetry for a while.
By TheSpinstress about a year ago in Poets
My furry friend
When I first saw you I thought you were the cutest dog I’ve seen. Especially those floppy ears of yours and the little boot like feet with the white print on them. I knew you would bring us joy but, I had no idea how much. With that feisty personality of yours howling at me, when I first get up going to the cabinet to get a treat first thing in the morning or want to go for a walk which in our house we have to say W otherwise you go crazy and start whining if we don’t go right away. I love how when you’re happy your tail doesn’t just wag it also spins which, I find quite unusual. Being able to play all by yourself in the back yard and how athletic you are you’ve got such great skill. Running, prancing, and rolling around catching squirrels and birds. Going for nice long walks, hikes then go to your bed and get covered with your blanket when it’s cold and putting up with your brother over the years tormenting you saying, Elsa go upstairs every night with your tail between your legs.
By Jennifer lindquist4 days ago in Poets
TUS NUA - ch 53
TUS NUA – ch 53 New Beginnings – Mia and Midnight (*)(*)(*) Finola knew Ali’s brother-in-law needed to put his mind at rest. She fed her arm through his and led him outside. “We’ll sit here. If you like, I can put a block around us so our conversation will be private.”
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Very nice little thoughts.
Haha! How perfect! Loved this little nugget of rhyme! Well done, Spinstress!
Three time rhyme. Perfect.
Hahahahhaa I especially loved your last line!
Love this take on senryu! It captures the essence of how form and expression should flow naturally without forcing rhyme. A fun little reminder that poetry is about authenticity, not just rules!
lol, love it