I am swept away,
Leaves fly as winged gods, distilled
In a copper storm.
My work:
Patheos,
The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,
The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books
Silent Bites by Eukalypto
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Oh man, the diction here combined with the imagery is stellar. A copper storm...what a way to describe fall leaves falling!! Well done! c:
Oooo, leaves fly like winged gods in a copper storm, that was brilliant!
Love your imagery here π
Stunning work Melly Gold! Gurl you flame-broiled this challenge! Go gurl! πͺπΎπ§‘π
Wow! impressive!!!
I love the copper storm - beautiful images. Itβs great job..
Beautiful colours here Sis π§‘πππΏππππ
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Comments (7)
Oh man, the diction here combined with the imagery is stellar. A copper storm...what a way to describe fall leaves falling!! Well done! c:
Oooo, leaves fly like winged gods in a copper storm, that was brilliant!
Love your imagery here π
Stunning work Melly Gold! Gurl you flame-broiled this challenge! Go gurl! πͺπΎπ§‘π
Wow! impressive!!!
I love the copper storm - beautiful images. Itβs great job..
Beautiful colours here Sis π§‘πππΏππππ