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Tears streaming down my face
out of place
toxic space
under appreciated grace
not a trace
run away from the rat race
tripping on my shoelace
gotta grab my mace
if I wanna get some...
peace
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (10)
Wow, you blew my mind, yet again!!!
I'm, new and this poem just has that umph! ya know.
Oh, I loved this! I don't know how I missed it but just caught it on the Raise your voice thread! Glad I did!
Love this!❤️🙏🌻
This is awesome Tanya. I truly love a good rhyming flow xx
Okay but this is low-key fun! I kinda love that it starts dramatic and ends like, “actually… I just want peace.” Relatable arc in 10 lines! 💖
Sometimes when I have a lot of big feelings I also need to rhyme 🫶🏼 😅
You ok, giantess harpist? Nice lil poem!
I love the flow and rhyming of this! Great work :-)
I especially loved the way you made this rhyme. So cool!